Sunday, April 2, 2023

Chapter 1: Section 7: Page 58: Lines 13-14 (994-995)

 "Figured there was no point trying to hide it. Minute and a half longer, she'd've figured it out anyway."

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"Minute and a half longer, she'd've figured it out anyway"
Were they having sex when they first saw each other?

This entire conversation makes no sense. Perhaps this did happen when Dally was five because she has no idea that Merle has no idea how to answer questions.

"What attracted you to her?"
"Oh, well, she didn't run away when I told her I was attracted to her."
"So it was love at first she didn't reject you when you said you were attracted to her for not rejecting you?"
"Well, she was going to figure it out soon enough since I was going to tell her that I was attracted to her to find out if I was attracted to her by her reaction to me telling her I was attracted to her."

Don't worry! There are just two lines left in the conversation and it doesn't get any better!

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